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Another in a series im thinking of starting.

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:iconslamdunker:
First thing i like about this image is the mood it gives me because of the color. It looks like a very warm summer evening. I look at all the subjects that are out of focus and try to guess what it is and where it was taken. My eyes always find their way back to the power pole. Now and then i discover the branches at the right edge. Overall interesting composition, but there are some parts that could be improved.
The upper part of the sky is a bit too much, which makes it look like dead space. Everything is going on in the lower part of the picture. A panoramic crop may work here. Second "problem" is the placement of the branches. If you take it into the picture, i'd use it as real starting point for the viewer and place it further afar from the edge, but also not really centered. You can experiment to connect it with the background.

Again i would like to say that i like the swallow DOF here, really adds something to the picture that the viewer needs to think about. Interesting work!
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:iconlevisei:
I see what you mean, it does have a little bit of the same feel as that picture I took :) I'll be taking a look at your gallery.

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:iconhaliwa87:
i love the focal point in this one. i will definately check out your gallery. wish i could be more help in the critique department but im just learning myself :) we can grow together *thumbs up* lol

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Thanks for that :)

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:iconcloser-to-you:
this one is gorgeous baby :) i love the leaves in the foreground :)

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:iconsheena-x-zelos:
I like the depth that is created by the sharpness in the leaves there. Of course the setting is beautiful as well! Nice work!

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:icondoodledrag14:
I like the picture all in all but I think if you add more of that plant in on the one side it would bring even more to the depth and feeling of the picture. past that the colors are beautiful
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Agreed completely, i regretted that the second i uploaded it!

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